Shopping on the Internet作文,请修改一下,哪错了,错在什么方面.①Now,as is know to all.② The most of people prefer shop on the Internet to shop on the store .③Nowadays,it is common for computer applying.④Online shopping has been b

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Shopping on the Internet作文,请修改一下,哪错了,错在什么方面.①Now,as is know to all.② The most of people prefer shop on the Internet to shop on the store .③Nowadays,it is common for computer applying.④Online shopping has been b

Shopping on the Internet作文,请修改一下,哪错了,错在什么方面.①Now,as is know to all.② The most of people prefer shop on the Internet to shop on the store .③Nowadays,it is common for computer applying.④Online shopping has been b
Shopping on the Internet作文,请修改一下,哪错了,错在什么方面.
①Now,as is know to all.② The most of people prefer shop on the Internet to shop on the store .③Nowadays,it is common for computer applying.④Online shopping has been became a kind of fashion .⑤However,I think the Online shopping like a coin.⑥ It has two sides.
⑦On the one hand,it is very convenient for people to buy goods by online shopping .⑧we spend less time in doing it.⑨It is beneficial to people,especially for the old and sick one.
⑩Of course,online shopping is not very perfect .(⒒)First,what should people do when faced with the fraud-online?(12) So bad that people have trouble in complaining.
〔13〕I think that if you want to go shopping on the Internet,you should pay your attention on the store’s credit.(14)Then I advised government to take some measures about online shopping

Shopping on the Internet作文,请修改一下,哪错了,错在什么方面.①Now,as is know to all.② The most of people prefer shop on the Internet to shop on the store .③Nowadays,it is common for computer applying.④Online shopping has been b
Personality,I uphold the former.Its pros outweight ite cans.But to 楼主,我看了下,你单词用的比较不错,但是语法错误有点多,还有文章中心