help with this English articleOh,my god!My black saturday!First of all ,I overslept.And then,I went outside without breakfast.When I got to school,I realized I had left my homework.The teacher was very angry,she gave me a teach.I felt very sad.And th

help with this English articleOh,my god!My black saturday!First of all ,I overslept.And then,I went outside without breakfast.When I got to school,I realized I had left my homework.The teacher was very angry,she gave me a teach.I felt very sad.And th
help with this English article
Oh,my god!My black saturday!
First of all ,I overslept.And then,I went outside without breakfast.When I got to school,I realized I had left my homework.The teacher was very angry,she gave me a teach.I felt very sad.And then,my classmate Bie Shu wanted to borrow my mobile phone to gave his parents a call.I gave my phone to him.When he was calling,the polite teacher Cui Shuai confiscated the phone.Yuck!I was angry about him.But he believe Mr.Cui could gave it for me.In the afternoon,he gave the phone to me.I feel really lucky.But the dooms fall down me again!In Math class,Bie Shu asked me if I can stare the teacher Sha.I agreed.But Sha found me.She got mad.And said she wanted to talk with my parents.
Of course,I didn't agree.
Yuck.Bad Saturday!
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help with this English articleOh,my god!My black saturday!First of all ,I overslept.And then,I went outside without breakfast.When I got to school,I realized I had left my homework.The teacher was very angry,she gave me a teach.I felt very sad.And th
你前面那句：she gave me a teach 想表达的是什么意思? teach是动词哦.!
"to gave his parents "错了,应该是give,因为to 后面用动词原形...
the polite teacher Cui Shuai .你是想说"政治老师"吗?应该是politics...
还有后面的yuck打错了..我看你是想说fuck吧?呵呵!
"But he believe Mr.Cui could gave it for me.In the afternoon,he gave the phone to me.I feel really lucky.But the dooms fall down me again."
这段话应该是But he believed Mr.Cui would give it back to me.In the afternoon,he did ! I felt really lucky.But the dooms fell down me again
if I can stare 应该是 if I dare stare at
呵呵~,你的错误有点多呢...