高一短文改错On my way to home yesterday afternoon,I happened to witness a traffic accident.When an old woman was crossed the road,she was knocked down by a boy riding bike.The boy was such frightened that he stood still at the scene but didn't

高一短文改错On my way to home yesterday afternoon,I happened to witness a traffic accident.When an old woman was crossed the road,she was knocked down by a boy riding bike.The boy was such frightened that he stood still at the scene but didn't
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On my way to home yesterday afternoon,I happened to witness a traffic accident.When an old woman was crossed the road,she was knocked down by a boy riding bike.
The boy was such frightened that he stood still at the scene but didn't know what to do.
I quickly went up and saw the old woman lie on the ground,making crying because of pain.I stopped a taxi and told the driver that had happened.The driver drove them to the nearest hospital at once.To our relieve,we were told that the old woman wasn't injured seriously after she was examined carefully.The boy was deep grateful for our help.

高一短文改错On my way to home yesterday afternoon,I happened to witness a traffic accident.When an old woman was crossed the road,she was knocked down by a boy riding bike.The boy was such frightened that he stood still at the scene but didn't
On my way《 to 去掉》home 《on》yesterday afternoon,I happened to witness a traffic accident.When an old woman was 《crossing》 the road,she was knocked down by a boy riding bike.
The boy was 《so》 frightened that he stood still at the scene but didn't know what to do.
I quickly went up and saw the old woman ,lying》 on the ground,making 《cry》 because of pain.I stopped a taxi and told the driver 《what》 had happened.The driver drove them to the nearest hospital at once.To our《 relief》,we were told that the old woman wasn't injured seriously after she was examined carefully.The boy was deep grateful for our help.

第一，ON MY WAY HOME home 是副词，不能加TO
第二，第二行，WAS CROSSING老人正在过马路
第三，第四行，SAW THE OLD WEMAN LYING see sb doing 看见某人正在干什么
第四，第五行，what had happened
第五，最后一行DEEPLY GRATEFUL DEEP 是形容词，不能修饰GRATEFU...

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第一，ON MY WAY HOME home 是副词，不能加TO
第二，第二行，WAS CROSSING老人正在过马路
第三，第四行，SAW THE OLD WEMAN LYING see sb doing 看见某人正在干什么
第四，第五行，what had happened
第五，最后一行DEEPLY GRATEFUL DEEP 是形容词，不能修饰GRATEFUL

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On my way home yesterday afternoon, I happened to witness a traffic accident. When an old woman was crossing the road, she was knocked down by a boy riding a bike.
The boy was so frightened that ...

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On my way home yesterday afternoon, I happened to witness a traffic accident. When an old woman was crossing the road, she was knocked down by a boy riding a bike.
The boy was so frightened that he stood still at the scene and didn't know what to do.
I quickly went up and saw the old woman lying on the ground, keeping crying because of pain. I stopped a taxi and told the driver wthat had happened. The driver drove them to the nearest hospital at once. To our relief, we were told that the old woman wasn't injured seriously after she was examined carefully. The boy was deeply grateful for our help.
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The driver drove them (改为us )to the nearst hospital at once .