请帮忙改篇作文My Lovely CatI have a cat.It’s a very lovely cat.It’s name is Mimi.It’s white and brown.It has two big eyes and a long white tail.It likes eating fish and mice.It is very clever.When I get home after school,Mimi runs to me

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请帮忙改篇作文My Lovely CatI have a cat.It’s a very lovely cat.It’s name is Mimi.It’s white and brown.It has two big eyes and a long white tail.It likes eating fish and mice.It is very clever.When I get home after school,Mimi runs to me

请帮忙改篇作文My Lovely CatI have a cat.It’s a very lovely cat.It’s name is Mimi.It’s white and brown.It has two big eyes and a long white tail.It likes eating fish and mice.It is very clever.When I get home after school,Mimi runs to me
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My Lovely Cat
I have a cat.It’s a very lovely cat.It’s name is Mimi.It’s white and brown.It has two big eyes and a long white tail.It likes eating fish and mice.It is very clever.When I get home after school,Mimi runs to me with “Meow,meow”.Mimi always wags its tail and runs to me.I like playing with Mimi.It is my good friend.
Mimi brings me pleasure.

请帮忙改篇作文My Lovely CatI have a cat.It’s a very lovely cat.It’s name is Mimi.It’s white and brown.It has two big eyes and a long white tail.It likes eating fish and mice.It is very clever.When I get home after school,Mimi runs to me
My Lovely Cat
I have a very lovely cat Mimi.It's a white and brown cat who has two big eyes and a long white tail.Fish and mice are its likes.In addition ,it's a clever cat.When I get home after school,it always runs to me with “Meow,Meow”and wags its tail to make me smile.In sum ,I like Mimi.It's my good friend who brings me pleasure.
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I have a very lovely cat ,Mimi.Her colour is white brown with big eyes and long white tail.She likes eating fish ,as well as mice.Mimi is very clever, and when I get home aftre school,she alaways wags...

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I have a very lovely cat ,Mimi.Her colour is white brown with big eyes and long white tail.She likes eating fish ,as well as mice.Mimi is very clever, and when I get home aftre school,she alaways wags her tail and runs to me with "Meow meow''.She brings me much pleasure.In a word,I like playing with Mimi and we have become good friends.

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