急求英语改错,一共十处in order to keep health and get close nature,we have decided to go on a hike this sunday,April 19.all the students of senior one are welcome to take part this activity.those would like to go are requested to sign their

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急求英语改错,一共十处in order to keep health and get close nature,we have decided to go on a hike this sunday,April 19.all the students of senior one are welcome to take part this activity.those would like to go are requested to sign their

急求英语改错,一共十处in order to keep health and get close nature,we have decided to go on a hike this sunday,April 19.all the students of senior one are welcome to take part this activity.those would like to go are requested to sign their
急求英语改错,一共十处
in order to keep health and get close nature,we
have decided to go on a hike this sunday,April 19.all
the students of senior one are welcome to take part
this activity.
those would like to go are requested to sign their
names in the students union before the 18th of
April.please wear your sports shoes and something
which can be easy seen,red jacket,for example.
in addition to,please remember to take some water
and lunch with you.also please remember to get to
school before 7;00 a.m.and we wil set out at 7:30.we
will come back in about 5'o clock in the afternoon.
we hope all the partcipants will enjoy them in this
activity.

急求英语改错,一共十处in order to keep health and get close nature,we have decided to go on a hike this sunday,April 19.all the students of senior one are welcome to take part this activity.those would like to go are requested to sign their
答案来了:
1 health改成healthy
2 get close后面加 to
3.April 前面加on
4.take part 后面加 in
5.those 后面加 who
6.easy 改成easily
7 in addition to去掉to
8.also 改成and
9 come back in改成at
10 最后一句them 改成themselves
11.welcome改成welcomed