[英语]希望大家帮我找找作文中的语法错误.初中生作文,I never believe there is any treasure that people can find it.If somebody find it so many years later,they must has been corrupted.So I never hope I can find it.but in fact ,we

[英语]希望大家帮我找找作文中的语法错误.初中生作文,I never believe there is any treasure that people can find it.If somebody find it so many years later,they must has been corrupted.So I never hope I can find it.but in fact ,we
[英语]希望大家帮我找找作文中的语法错误.初中生作文,
I never believe there is any treasure that people can find it.If somebody find it so many years later,they must has been corrupted.So I never hope I can find it.but in fact ,we often can see treasure,and they are easy to get.they are knewledge.everyone will seesome word you never see it before.I thnk the fastest way to understand it is search at dictionary.i used to devepend on paper dictionary.but now i have E-book,it is lighter,stonger and faster than paper pages.it is the biggeat revealer for me now.E-book help me get knowledge easily.Knowledge is useful .
When we grow up,then we will getting job.the more knowledge you have learned,the more things you can try.anyway,knowledge can help you get better price.for example:help to find treasure(if there was),invent some thing to sell and so on.the worthless thing is spend time on soap opera.they can't teach you anything,but the relationship between mother and daughter-in-law,and something absurd.for example:it's impossible in life.i only watch it as a joke.almost soap opera can't teach us useful knowledge.only book can teach me world how change,the things how grow.

[英语]希望大家帮我找找作文中的语法错误.初中生作文,I never believe there is any treasure that people can find it.If somebody find it so many years later,they must has been corrupted.So I never hope I can find it.but in fact ,we
错误有点多,一个一个指出来太麻烦了,我修改了一下重新打一遍吧.
I don't believe there are any treasures that people can find.Even if they are found by someone so many years after being buried,they must has been corrupted.So I never hope I can find any.However,in fact we can often see another kind of treasure which is easy to get in our life.It is knowledge.Everyone may know some words that you have never seen before.I think the fastest way to understand them is to search them on the dictionary.I used to depend on the paper dictionary,but now I have an E-book.It is lighter,stonger and more convenient than the paper one,and it is the most useful revealer for me in study now.The E-book helps me acquire knowledge more easily.
As we all know（众所周知）,knowledge is useful.When we grow up,we need to get a job,and the more knowledge we have learned,the more things we can try.Anyway,knowledge can help increase your value.For example,it helps you find treasures (if there are any),invent something to sell and so on.In my opinion（在我看来,依我之见,等于As far as I'm concerned),the worthless thing is to spend your time on the soap operas.They can tell you nothing but the relationship between a mother and a daughter-in-law,which is absurd and trivial (琐碎的）.Take The Man from the Star (此处用斜体,英文中没有书名号,用首字母大写和斜体表示,注意介词和定冠词the和不定冠词的首字母不大写）,a popular South Korean TV series,for an example.It's impossible in life,and I only consider it as a joke.Basically soap operas can't teach us any useful knowledge.Only books can teach us how the world changes and how things develop.
注意一下大小写和单词拼写错误,另外,最主要的问题就是定语从句的用法,作为宾语的it被重复使用,导致成分赘余.for example后面常用逗号而非冒号,而且接一整句而非短语,接短语可用Take sth for an example来举例.为使文章意思表述更流畅完整,要多用些常见短语和连接词.虽然有些不足之处,但对于英语初学者而言这篇文章写的很好了,再接再厉!

第一句改为：I never believe that people can find any treasure. somebody 很少用，一般用someone。而且用了 somebody，后面主语应该用he。时态不要乱用。改为：If someone finds it many years later,he must be corrupted. but in fact那里另起一句话是要大写的...

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第一句改为：I never believe that people can find any treasure. somebody 很少用，一般用someone。而且用了 somebody，后面主语应该用he。时态不要乱用。改为：If someone finds it many years later,he must be corrupted. but in fact那里另起一句话是要大写的哦。we often can see一般表达为we can often see。你的句子显得单一，所以帮你改成：But in fact ,we can often see treasures which is knowledge,and easy to get it 。some words 复数！！！you never see before！！！不要it。is to look up in the dictionary。查字典用固定搭配。E-book helps me to get knowledge easily. 讲到这里突然来句Knowledge is useful 很费解。
When we grow up, we will get jobs.the more knowledge you learn,the more jobs you can try.anyway,knowledge can help you to get better price.知识能让你得到更好的钱？？？好费解。for example:it can help to find treasures(if there were),invent some things to sell and so on.the worthless thing is to spend time on soap opera.they can't teach you anything,but the relationship between mother and daughter-in-law, 妈妈跟媳妇的关系这个有关联吗？费解。and something absurd.for example:it's impossible in life.i only watch it as a joke. Almost soap opera can't teach us useful knowledge.only books can teach me how the world changes,and how the things grow。