作业帮每一句的语法.styles show who you are,but they also creat sterotypes and distance between groups.for intstance,a businessman might look at a boy with green hair and multiple piercings as an outsider .but to another person,the boy is a strict con
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每一句的语法.styles show who you are,but they also creat sterotypes and distance between groups.for intstance,a businessman might look at a boy with green hair and multiple piercings as an outsider .but to another person,the boy is a strict con
每一句的语法.
styles show who you are,but they also creat sterotypes and distance between groups.for intstance,a businessman might look at a boy with green hair and multiple piercings as an outsider .but to another person,the boy is a strict conformist.he dresses a certain way to deliver the message of rebellion and separation ,but within that group,the look is uniform.how we accept or reject a style is in fact how we react to the society we live in.
每一句的语法.styles show who you are,but they also creat sterotypes and distance between groups.for intstance,a businessman might look at a boy with green hair and multiple piercings as an outsider .but to another person,the boy is a strict con
大致看了一下,感觉有些词用得不符合语境,同时语法略有瑕疵
styles在这里换成Personality也许好一些,stereotype换成bias,strict换成typical,conformist不知你想表达什么,但是不妥；deliver一般用于传统意义上的“送,给”,在这里不符合语境
还有其他诸如此类的问题等等,还是重新思考一下句式结构和词语搭配好一些
个人不觉得有甚麼错呀，就是串错宇多了点。