英语,请帮我看看以下英语文章有没有语法错误My hometownMy hometown is very much. My father was born in He nan, mother was born in He bei province, I was born in TJ, my father works in XA. I was three years ago there lived in.The

英语,请帮我看看以下英语文章有没有语法错误My hometownMy hometown is very much. My father was born in He nan, mother was born in He bei province, I was born in TJ, my father works in XA. I was three years ago there lived in.The
英语,请帮我看看以下英语文章有没有语法错误
My hometown
My hometown is very much. My father was born in He nan, mother was born in He bei province, I was born in TJ, my father works in XA. I was three years ago there lived in.There have also become my hometown.I like over there very much, Small as it is, it’s very beautiful.
My hometown is a famous reservoir. water is the source of life. people have a sweet water,Over to drink the bitter history .My father works here .There is a very stately dam ,It about 107 meters high, like a giant stands between the hills.You can take a yacht into the reservoir,That's very exciting things.
This a local specialty rich ： chestnut、walnut 、luanhe carp、.Can let you sure tasted well
There are many hills around my hometown and they are more beautiful than some big mountains. In spring, we can fly kites on the top of the hills. The kites fly very high. In summer, the trees are green and the grass is green too. It is green everywhere on the hills. There are so many wild apple trees on the hills. The wild apples are nice to eat. In autumn, the corns under and around the hills are ripe. So we eat them almost every day. In winter, when it snows, all the ground is covered with snow. We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow .
In my hometown the sky is blue, the air is clean.
People are very hospitable , welcome to visit my hometown
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英语,请帮我看看以下英语文章有没有语法错误My hometownMy hometown is very much. My father was born in He nan, mother was born in He bei province, I was born in TJ, my father works in XA. I was three years ago there lived in.The
典型中国英语,语法错很多.没有耐性看的话会晕死.请多读地道英文书,多练笔.
I have three hometowns,because my father was born in He nan,my mother was born in He bei province,I was born in Tingjing,my father works in (Xi'an)XA.I moved there three years ago.so Xi'an is my hometown now.I like to live here.It is small but it is beautiful.
My hometown has a famous reservoir.the water is the source of life.People now can have the clean and sweet water,and say goodbye to the old days which having the dirty and bitter water.My father works there .There is a very stately dam ,it is about 107 meters high,like a giant standing between the hills.You can take a yacht and go around the reservoir,I think that's a very exciting thing to me.
There are many special local food here,chestnut、walnut 、luanhe carp and so on,they are all very delicious.
There are many hills around my hometown and I think they are more beautiful than some other famous mountains of China.In spring,we can fly kites on the top of the hill.The kites can fly very high.In summer,it is green everywhere on the hills.There are so many wild apple trees on the hills.The apples are nice .In autumn,the corns around the hills are ripe,we like them and we eat them every day.In winter,when it snows,all the ground is covered with snow.We can play with snow and sometimes we eat the clean snow .
In my hometown,the sky is blue,the air is clean.
People are very hospitable .Welcome to visit my hometown,I am sure you will love it and you will have a good time.

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I have four hometown.,HB HN TJ and XA.I think you will ask me why.Because My father has been born in He nan My mother has been born in He bei.I was born TJ.I live...

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错的离谱了，我给你改一改，大意不变 采纳的话不用加悬赏，助人为乐
I have four hometown.,HB HN TJ and XA.I think you will ask me why.Because My father has been born in He nan My mother has been born in He bei.I was born TJ.I lived in XA for 3 years because my father worked there.So XA also bocomes my hometown. (后面两句没读懂)
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第一句缺宾语(比如is beautiful very much),你是打错了吧。后面应该是Henan Hebei，连起来的。
three years ago 应是three years old.后面的there lived in我不明白你说的是什么， 应该是when there lived in XX.
注意时态一致。后面There have 不对，应该是there be句型，去掉...

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第一句缺宾语(比如is beautiful very much),你是打错了吧。后面应该是Henan Hebei，连起来的。
three years ago 应是three years old.后面的there lived in我不明白你说的是什么， 应该是when there lived in XX.
注意时态一致。后面There have 不对，应该是there be句型，去掉have就行。后面一句的over应去掉吧，你斟酌一下。
尽量用简单句，避免错误。Can let you sure tasted well（把这句话变简单点比较好。比如they are delicious.这样句意明确，又不会出错）
they are more beautiful than some big mountains.（more应是much）
最好写点更深层次的东西，再延伸点就能使文章变长。有些句子写了意义不大，可以省去。
有些没改到，你再多看几遍，自己想想、改改吧。

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