帮我看看下面这篇英语作文有没有什麼错误?I am very happy today.Because we move into the new house today.My new house is in the center of the city of the tall building .This building has 16 floors ,my house is on the tenth floor .My n

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帮我看看下面这篇英语作文有没有什麼错误?I am very happy today.Because we move into the new house today.My new house is in the center of the city of the tall building .This building has 16 floors ,my house is on the tenth floor .My n

帮我看看下面这篇英语作文有没有什麼错误?I am very happy today.Because we move into the new house today.My new house is in the center of the city of the tall building .This building has 16 floors ,my house is on the tenth floor .My n
帮我看看下面这篇英语作文有没有什麼错误?
I am very happy today.Because we move into the new house today.My new house is in the center of the city of the tall building .This building has 16 floors ,my house is on the tenth floor .My new house isn't very big .There are only two bedrooms,a small study ,a living room and a kitchen.I love my study very much ,because I can study quietly in my study .

帮我看看下面这篇英语作文有没有什麼错误?I am very happy today.Because we move into the new house today.My new house is in the center of the city of the tall building .This building has 16 floors ,my house is on the tenth floor .My n
I am very happy today.Because we moved into the new house today.My new house is in a tall building which is at the center of the city.This building has 16 floors ,and my house is on the tenth floor .My new house isn't very big .There are only two bedrooms,a small study ,a living room and a kitchen.I love my study very much ,because I can study quietly in there .

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This building has 16 floors ，my house is on the tenth floor 。这句话中间需要加一个连词，比如在my house之前加and。。。 语法就这些。。 但是语言像小学水平~~

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